Jacob's Masterpiece

This is Jacob's story about our summer vacation.  He has been working on it for 2 weeks - just for fun.  I did not do any editing or correcting because he is a first grader and I love it this way!  :)  Enjoy!

 

T he   Schuldheisz

Once  opon a  time there  was  a  family  called   Schuldheisz.   We  were in    

Montana .  we were  d iveing on  the high  d ive  and  L illy  was scared she   said

I  don't one    d ive  she  said  and   everybody was saying  go  Lilly  she  jamped  

from   the  high  dive   and   she   said   it   dos'nt  hurt.  " It  is  cool said  Lilly.

everybody  was excited! at rockaway beach We  went  on  a  treasure  hunt. And  we  found  small treasure  chset.  We  eat with  ton   of   family  a  supper  and  after  that  Jacob  and     Danny  sing  an  army  song.  grandpa  tell  for  everybody  a  pierot storey.  Dad musi-c   instrument.   Ash  Aca  and  Alex  there  mom and  dad  made  a  show  for e-rey  body.  Jacob  and  Danny   sang  agein  a  difrent  song   about america.                                                  we  camp   cook   marshmellous.  In  Montana  we found  a lot of cool  games.   We  played   deangled  ball  and  football  and  soccer.